- Possibly scrap the tube location. Might be easier at the busstop - try to contact TFL to sort out locations.
- Girl keeps headphones in at busstop / tube, the reveal of silence can be when she arrives home.
- Change the rating to a 15. Make the synopsis slightly darker, really hard hitting and gritty in this world gone quiet. Explicit violence, sex, political commentary- tackly some tough issues. Possibly scary.
- Shoot more than we need then cut back.
- Different ages of people at busstop / tube if possible, adds realism to the scene.
After this feedback, and discussing possible changes, we finally got the GREEN LIGHT!
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